Wednesday, December 31, 2008

Another new day but with a difference...

Another new day but with a difference ... not 2008 rather 2009...
The day is going to end, but its unusual
others passed away silently,but it has new resolutions ..
One more year ended, and another follows..
Its new year party , all rocking on the floor
but I am still in fix ...
To enjoy the one thats yet to come, havent seen,
Or to mourn on one that showed the scene..
The parties were held last year too,
To enjoy this one for things it may bestow....
but the year have ended .. with recession , job crises
cries n hues of blast and terror at nariman, oberoi ,Taj
We planned for a change,but its now to show that u care
And you wont sit back and stare...
And if anyone would had a heart ,
no one would have planned for enjoying their part ..

and thats why i feel n wish that you all have a safe n secure new year ahead .. 2009

5 comments:

Vikas Bajpai said...

Ya I surely agree with you, this year we shouldn't follow what we used to do as in previous years let this year go peacefully and pray for all those who lost their life for the sake of safety of others and pray to god .
Need to pray for getting rid of this resession too ;)

ritu said...
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RISHABH SHUKLA said...

you kno u r really clever writer
you kno how to change the topic in a poem.......
beginning was really gud.and with a sudden turn u came up wee terror attack...
in start were reader thought u will write abt ur feeling abt new year...suddenly he got indulge wee the feeling of cry n sorrow of the victims....
here you go ........
keep it up becouse u r really a gud writer
your previous entry abt kit was seriously grt..giving entire info in detail.....but with the use of less words.......
i like that
mye tips will we use some words which give entire feeling bye writting only a sigle words
that will giv....grt effect..

Mechworld said...

I m completely agree wid u dear....
lets pray to God that this year doesn't follow last year.....
good effort....

smita singh said...

really good attempt and i am glad to c dat ma frnd is so gud at writing...n deeply pray fr soul of persons who lost their lives due to terrorism...........god bless...