Monday, November 17, 2008

DrEaMs

Dislike when you like someone,
like a twinkling star in lonely dark,
blue sky like an ocean scene,
sun like a sunflower in her dream.

Blossams smell from valley of love,
essence that make u feel up,
make u feel up like a rising star,
have u something in your heart.

Emotions crumble in my little dream,
like an infant in her mother's dream,
jest joy and happiness are my words,
rise in love are my true words.

Love is not a word of four,
every letter has its own mean,
why do her heart shine,
is there a inner space  that was mine.


rishabh shukla

3 comments:

Vikas Bajpai said...

well done dear...very well done...this poem tells that how much pure heart is...and what you feel about love and what is the real meaning of love.....this poem will definitely make a solid impression on the heart of some one who is trying to keep you aside and searching for other options....
Even I am highly impressed dear....

The last four lines are not only the mere 4 lines of the poem but are lot more than my words,lot more than my reach....

RISHABH SHUKLA said...

hmmmm gr8 comments sir ...........
i found success bye ur comment as u hav read so seriouslly

Anonymous said...

WELL DONE DEAR...........YOU HAVE TALENT TO CREATE BEAUTIFUL LINES....

KEEP IT UP........