tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post5377081500017732620..comments2023-09-08T15:35:02.433+05:30Comments on Day at college ends..But here your day goes on.....: THE SON OF ADAM...Vikas Bajpaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04476762927859132336noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post-79898201372970832822009-01-28T15:11:00.000+05:302009-01-28T15:11:00.000+05:30thankz a lot all mye readers wel i wanna more comm...thankz a lot all mye readers wel i wanna more comments for my writing <BR/>and do more meteoric writing in future<BR/>thanks againAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14717815955893042471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post-9714055639096210142009-01-27T21:39:00.000+05:302009-01-27T21:39:00.000+05:30Hmm….i fine piece, written with great pain but I t...Hmm….i fine piece, written with great pain but I think that the poet is so much dipped into the mood that somewhere he fails to get in resonance with the common reader. The idea behind the whole poem is somewhere lost into oblivion. The poet could have been a bit more precise. Otherwise everything else seems in place and if one takes pain of reading the piece of writing over and over again he is likely to get a fair insight into the whole atmosphere that the poet has tried to create. Good luck! Rishabh… I hope to read more of u…..keep up the good work! You possess a stroke of a motivator.~AKRATI~https://www.blogger.com/profile/16539392793545809798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post-20982845882887494702009-01-25T13:49:00.000+05:302009-01-25T13:49:00.000+05:30ya navi maam u got my vibvese this poem is my fav ...ya navi maam u got my vib<BR/>vese this poem is my fav one<BR/>i hav written after watching a video<BR/>of linkin park's "what i'av done"<BR/>so what i can do to change the world is all abt it......<BR/>m very obliged with the comments<BR/>god bless everybodyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14717815955893042471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post-33701420676933818062009-01-24T20:22:00.000+05:302009-01-24T20:22:00.000+05:30i read it once, twice.. thrice.. and continuing to...i read it once, twice.. thrice.. and continuing to do the same again.. <BR/>tried to get the latent feelings but still there r sum yet to discover.. i must say that ur effort is commendable .. specially the way u have portrayed the feelings of a youth towards the current situation.. the helpness along with the will to put forth efforts for a change .. the communication between the angel and u ... thats beyond imagination atleast in my case :) .. a very gud job .. keep it up hope so i get chance to read more of such compositions..Navjyot Kaurhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03109487961094997369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post-67226080995491775782009-01-24T20:01:00.000+05:302009-01-24T20:01:00.000+05:30Above written commment by vikas is a sarcastic com...Above written commment by vikas is a sarcastic comment.publically aisei nhi krte hia vikas..n by d way rishabh poem is reallly gud n keep up the gud work........god bless beta.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4139024252464527251.post-60965407468295187652009-01-24T19:54:00.000+05:302009-01-24T19:54:00.000+05:30hibhai by reading the first stanza main angel ka n...hi<BR/>bhai by reading the first stanza main angel ka naam to samajh gaya,par wwoh angel to nahi hai..... ;)<BR/>aage dekho ki kya kya hota hai poem me , let me read it thorughly.......Vikas Bajpaihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04476762927859132336noreply@blogger.com